From: Jonathan Cotleur <Cotleur>
Date: Sat Oct 2, 1999 3:52 pm
Subject: Saturday

THAILOG - I like the idea of giving him an exoskeleton, but that
should be a temporary solution, until he can achieve his goal of gaining the
nanites. Whether or not he does achieve this isn't necessarily a
set-in-stone part of the proposed arc.

DURID - I like your Maggie story! The dialogue's a tad melodramatic,
but the core of the idea sounds good. I'm unsure about the lawsuit,
though - on what grounds would Maggie's mother be suing? I think a
trial would be interesting, but I don't get the reason. Your Space
Spawn ideas, btw, while good, are irrelevent right now. (I've taken
note of them in my ongoing compilation that I'll present when next
season TD breakdowns come around - I guess I'm sort of doing what
Todd's doing for next seaon's Pendragon.)

GARLON - I agree with Rahsaan. Garlon's personality always seemed
reflective of his appearence - bland. He always struck me as very
level-headed and mild-mannered. And, there's the "mouse factor" that
Rahsaan mentioned; one doesn't spend centuries as a rodent and not
come out of it without a lingering need to stay inconspicuous. But I *do*
like the idea of him seeking out revenge on Demona (how he learns it
was her is a minor matter). I don't think he'd attract Seelie attention,
because he would pursue her through mundane means, not magical ones.
Kind of like "Patriot Games". ;)

TD - If you can help out with writing "A Tale of Two Gates" and/or "A
Merrior Hour", Nico, that'd be GREATLY appreciated. But has anyone
taken heed to my suggestion that we seek out the outline's original
writer for "A Merrior Hour" to see if she would like to write it?

CLONES - I think Thailog would have a chance winning them back,
particularly Delilah (whose hightened programming would HIGHTEN her
allegience to Thailog, whereas the others would be more susceptible to
suggestion and would stick with their pals in the Labyrinth - unlike
Delilah, who'd have an instinctive urge to go to Thailog, they'd need
to be lured back).

DEMONA - We should not reduce her involvement this season to the point
where she's on the level of Chavez. Let's keep her at the level she
used to maintain in the original series, as Nico suggests.

SHAUNTELL - I thought you'd solved your e-mail problems. You shouldn't
need to rewrite the outlines into e-mail messages. Just cut and paste
the text. (Ctrl+C and Shift+Insert)

LOUISA CACIATORE - She seems like an interesting character. Dracon
needs a revitalization of some sort. Just as long as she isn't
overdone.

CLANS - What do you have in mind for an Antarctican Clan, Nico?

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